sunshine_ooc | Okay, so this new Databook.

[[ For me, I think the only things that needs to be changed as of now is the addition of his Wind Affinity (Futon), (I believe Fire and Water are still there), and the Yin/Yang chakra.

Of course, the Yin/Yang could be attributed to techniques he learns with the Mangekyo or post death, so until then, that could be corrected when I get a proper translation.

His weight needs editing, but since he's got a condition and not his illness, I'd say 130 lbs is better than the 140 I had previously entered.

The section with his crows needs editing to correct it began with Shisui. ]]

His application/history is here.

[7:50:33 PM] Eternallyyouth: For now, we will leave the Yin-Yang off unless there is suitable translation for otherwise? For Futon/Wind, I'll just need a short blurb like you had for Katon explaining how he uses it, or even just that he has it. Without an explanation of how he uses it, we'll just insert the following into his powers section: He also has an affinity for Wind.

His weight will be changed from 140lbs to 130lbs.

His crows data is as follows:

Summoning:
Itachi is a bit differing in his range of summoning, preferring to train and bond with regular crows, who alone are extremely intelligent and bright birds. Not a single of his birds carries the ability for sentient human language, but is capable of understanding commands and mimicking words or short phrases, much like parrots are known for. Their intelligence, trainability, and ability to remember human faces and pass this information to other crows is vital to Itachi’s line of work. They are so common of a bird he does not have to curb their presence much at all in his travel, simply refrain from having the birds land on him until he is in private.

Just let me know how you would like it edited to reflect the Shisui origin.

Thanks!

I thought about including Sakura's water affinity, but since it's probably due to her teacher and not her natural ability, I think I'll just stick with her developing a fire affinity ~~because her Uchiha teacher~~. Mostly on-topic, at what point and how should characters update their backstories? (IE: Sasuke being jounin, Sakura getting a summoning contract, which are different from their character backstory)

For Rin, she has water and fire affinities and yang. ~~Maybe Earth too, since affinities seem easily gained and most healers have that~~

Sakura's application/history is here. / Rin's application/history is here.

For their affinities, you may write up a description of how those affinities are translated to skills/jutsus. Without a write up we will just insert the following into Sakura's powers section: In sunshine, Sakura has also developed a Fire affinity. And insert the following into Rin's powers section: Rin also has affinities for Water, Fire, and Yang. And yes or no on the Earth? ~~Did strikes mean belated-yes? Maybe, but really no? Thinking about it still?~~

Regarding character story changes (changes that have happened within the Sunshine gameplay and which were not originally on the application), if players would like to update their character histories and abilities they are free to at any time. We will just need the player to make the necessary revisions themselves and submit them to us via the mod email.

Thanks!

Edited 2014-11-08 04:05 (UTC)

Delayed answering this foreverrr so I could work out what exactly Sakura's training with Shisui and fire detailed.

Under Shisui's tutelage, Sakura has developed a Fire affinity, which manifests as various fire-based jutsus. Shisui and Shirakumo's specialties are chakra/nature-enhanced weapons and jutsus shaped like weapons, so applying both teachings to her fire jutsus means she has varying jutsus such as flaming shiruken, and a jutsu that uses fire in a similar method as the vacuum sword strike, which resembles Shisui's own halo dance. The difference in controlling Fire chakra to controlling Earth chakra is such that she doesn't use Fire jutsu in anything but practice right now, however. It's too dangerous to use it in serious situations.

Sakura has also been given a summoning contract with wise hares, and as such has been practicing kuchiyose jutsu to allow her to use it the most effectively and efficiently in actual battle that she can.

Also, because genjutsu falls under Yin release and it's a specialty of Sakura's, that would have to mean Sakura has a Yin affinity as well.

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Rin has affinities for Water, Fire, Earth (Yeh sure why not), and Yang. Mostly those affinities come into play with the complex process of medical ninjutsu, but Rin does know some basic offensive and defensive techniques with those natures. The rules of medical ninjutsu preclude her from using them in battle all that often, though.

Probably going to have to change his birthday lmfao ... October 19th. And instead of water, he'd have fire, wind, and electricity being the elements he's mastered, plus yin release.

Shisui's application/history is here.

His birthday has been changed to October 19th on both his history and the game timeline.

For his elements mastered, you may wish to write up a description of how those affinities are translated to skills/jutsus (much like you did under the ninjutsu section of his existing app). Without a write up we will just insert the following in near the top of his powers section: Shisui has mastered fire, wind, and electricity elements, plus yin release.

Thanks!

Additionally, did you want to add a note in his history about keeping birds since it is something you have expressed interest in potentially adding? If so, where in the history and could you please provide what you would like added. Thank you again!

I need a thing edited in Kushina's ability section to correspond with her age change. Under the 'jinchuuriki' subset, about 35 can be dropped to about 30 instead. Because until I hear different, I'm convinced she was 7 or 8 when she had the Kyuubi sealed in her. It can also be added that she has potential for Yin Release too, I guess? Not that she'd be aware of using it unless someone explained it to her........

Everything else has been edited in or didn't need a change/retcon.

Kushina's application/history is here.

Okay, so changing 35 to 30 to reflect the age correction made earier, the following correctly reflects the only necessary changes to that year-count?

Having had 30* years of practice, she's gained total control over Kurama [...] . (*Let's say she was eight when he was sealed in her, they've been together about 30 years at this point.

As for her Yin Release, if you want to write up a description of how that is translated to skills/jutsus, you may. Without a write up we will just insert the following into her powers section: Kushina has potential for Yin Release, but does not know it.

Thanks!

Yes! That's all I noticed for year/age count stuff that was terribly relevant. Everything else for that kind of thing is more sealed in place with the timeline to cover the last 16-17 years from the game's timeline divergence.

After a little more research on Yin Release, it would seem her chakra chains come from it as this type is noted to be "based on the spiritual energy that governs imagination, can be used to create form out of nothingness". I'd say chakra chains that can spontaneously burst from your back without ripping any holes in clothes or making you bleed or seeming to cause any real pain to the user would fall into this category. Also, they're functional in the subconscious which is strongly tied with the imagination.

So this is how I'd like it added to her powers section, preferably below what I wrote about her ninjutsu. This will also include fixing a glaring oversight on my part since her chakra chains aren't included right now... w h o o p s

Yin Release: Whether or not she's aware of the proper term, she does have abilities based in this release form with the special chakra she was born with. Most notable are her chakra chains which can be used within her subconscious or materialize in the real world to bind opponents, form impenetrable barriers, or do both at the same time.

Edited 2014-11-10 04:04 (UTC)

Awesome! Thank you for the update write-up. Redid those two spots (the 30 and the Yin Release) so give it a glance when you get a chance and make sure it's to your liking.

Looks great! Thanks so much~

I said in my app that Kiba has wind chakra affinity because his affinity wasn't published. I also thought that it'd make sense given that most his techniques use various vortexes, and also the fact that his sensei in Sunshine is a wind user.

However, his one chakra affinity has been revealed to be earth, and he doesn't have a second.

Despite the fact that he has one affinity in canon which, to me, is very interesting in terms of his character - because he'll never make it to jounin with only one, for instance - I'd kind of like him to have two in Sunshine? Just because without wind he kind of loses a lot of bonds with his sensei.
It's that or I conveniently ignore that canon tells me his chakra nature is different... >_>

Kiba's application/history is here.

It makes sense to give him both the canon one and the assumed one from the application, so if you would like to write up a description of how Earth is translated to skills/jutsus for him, you may. Without a write up we will just insert the following into his powers section: Kiba has an affinity for both Earth and Wind elements.

Thanks!

Just throwing in a note here that not having two elements doesn't mean Kiba couldn't make Jounin. A Jounin using two elements isn't uncommon, and it's usually at this stage that they pick up their second affinity. Mastering one through Genin > Chuunin and picking up a second later as a Jounin is a wise move.

Okay, so this new Databook.

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